Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Essay 1 Feedback

Mid Level 3 - Roughly equates to a solid C.
Good first attempt at an A2 essay! Not easy I know. I would like you to add the detail about Karl Marx and the Revolution that never happened. This then links to Adorno's idea that the audience had become too passive to revolt. Remember the main issue Adorno had was with PASSIVITY and the audience not even knowing they were being controlled by the media into accepting what was on offer and believing they had a choice. Add this in.

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